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Thursday, August 31, 2006

Distant Love



Did you ever say I love you
And the breeze took your words away
Did you feel them as they lingered
Then slowly drifted on their way

Did they journey long, searching for
The distant love you hoped they’d find
Was someone out there listening
For words from heart and mind

Did you ever hear I love you
As the wind blew through the trees
Closed your eyes and felt them there
As they came quietly in the breeze

Did you ever say I love you
And hear it whispered in return
Feeling your distant love beside you
And the desire within you burn

Did you ever see I love you
Floating quietly to you with ease
Wandering peacefully there beside you
Comes I love you in the breeze

-- FAD ;-)

4 Comments:

Blogger Organized Noise said...

I like this. Very deep, yet I can relate to it. Good stuff.

August 31, 2006 8:44 PM  
Blogger nikki said...

i'm concurring with organized noise on this...lovely poem. he turned me on to this spot. i'm glad he did. i'll be back.

August 31, 2006 9:22 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I have long for the i love you's in all it's sincereity just for today I think I've find my way.{smiles}

September 17, 2006 2:33 AM  
Blogger That One Girl said...

I love love LOVE this poem!
You are an amazing writer!

October 12, 2006 2:56 PM  

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